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lunatica

(53,410 posts)
5. That's very, very good
Sun Jan 26, 2020, 06:00 PM
Jan 2020

You have a unique way of dealing with light. It’s bright and infuses you’re entire painting with soft brilliance. It’s direct but it’s also reflected making the window and the bowl, the glass, the tabletop, and your husband’s beard and arm glow. Your soft colors are gentle and inviting.

I think you may be getting bogged down with the details of his hands and shirt because you’re getting caught up in the details. Instead of doing that just continue to follow through on your broad brushstrokes. Keep your brushwork consistent throughout.

I also like your brushwork. It’s bold and you’ve laid on the paint with a sure touch and with minimal detail allowing the viewer to fill in the details. I love it!

One of the things that helps me when I’m stuck or unsure of what to do is to prop the painting up where I can see it all the time and just live with it. Your painting will eventually let your subconscious come up with the solution.

Just tell people he was wearing mittens. ZZenith Jan 2020 #1
Lol. Mismatched mittens at that. :) femmedem Jan 2020 #3
A few years ago, I was examining a child at the pediatric... 3catwoman3 Jan 2020 #7
Aw, don't be envious. I'd rather be able to diagnose a child's illness. femmedem Jan 2020 #21
Decades ago, I read about an "artist" who would embed balloons... 3catwoman3 Jan 2020 #22
That's wonderful! Ohiogal Jan 2020 #2
Thanks. Yeah, not too much detail. But I hope I can make what little detail is there accurate. femmedem Jan 2020 #4
That's very, very good lunatica Jan 2020 #5
Thanks so much, Lunatica. femmedem Jan 2020 #6
I think I'll try your flake white lunatica Jan 2020 #8
How awful. A cruel teacher can smother a person's creativity, worse than no teacher at all. n/t femmedem Jan 2020 #9
I made a mistake: it was zinc white, not flake white. femmedem Jan 2020 #12
Thanks for the correction lunatica Jan 2020 #13
That's really beautiful! bif Jan 2020 #10
Thanks, yes I could easily overwork it in the areas where I'm struggling. femmedem Jan 2020 #11
For what its worth, I'd hang it as it is. marble falls Jan 2020 #14
Thank you! femmedem Jan 2020 #20
First rule of painting - Don't overdo it packman Jan 2020 #15
WOW I like it! demigoddess Jan 2020 #16
Thank you! femmedem Jan 2020 #19
Love it! The personality of your paintings reminds me of Andrew Wyeth...simple and Karadeniz Jan 2020 #17
Thanks! I was lucky enough to see a few Wyeths recently at a small local museum. femmedem Jan 2020 #18
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