I think I'm pretty much finished with this oil painting portrait now

[LiberalLoner]

I hope so much she will like the painting. I still have so much to learn about oil painting and art in general, it’s always a struggle.

https://pin.it/3TcOfbw

[soothsayer]

1. Those lips! That eye!

She’ll love it

[LiberalLoner]

2. Thank you so much! Is there anything I can do to make it better?

Any helpful suggestions I will be so grateful for!

[soothsayer]

4. I can't think of a thing. I like it

The eye has a cool Picasso-meets-Egypt quality, and the nose and neck are right on.

It’s softer and not as severe as the picture and I fancy that about it.

I’d be really pleased if it were mine.

[LiberalLoner]

5. Thank you! ❤️

[samnsara]

3. leave it just as it is...its perfect

[LiberalLoner]

6. Thank you! ❤️

[lunatica]

7. You've succeeded quite well!

The likeness is excellent and you capture her mysterious quality very well! It’s unmistakably her and I know she’ll love it for that very reason. Her pose is quite deliberate as is her aesthetic sense of what she wants to portray to the world. You’ve done her justice and that takes talent.

Talent is not something you can acquire. You can only develop your artistic skills which allows your talent to show through. Your oil painting chops are as good as any long timers, so if you’re just starting to use oils I can’t wait to see how you develop ease of using it.

By the way, all artists who are true to that inner calling that compels them to go deeply inward to bring some elusive thing into manifestation on a canvas will struggle. It’s the essence of artistic expression.

Technically you have shown the ability to use your tools to render what your eye sees. The details of color, texture of her hair, smoothness of her skin and shiny brilliance of her lipstick and the amazing details of her eye are amazing. Your portrait depicts her as a very bold woman, with a direct, almost defiant look taking the viewer by surprise even as she obscures her face with her hair. You show that in this pose she has two contrasting aspects. One side shows her showing us who she is in a bold, direct way, with that half of her hair shaved and her strong, unwavering and almost defiant stare, while the other side is shrouded, completely hidden from us, not allowing any detail to show. The overall result is that this is a portrait of a real and complicated person who feels quite comfortable in her persona.

[LiberalLoner]

9. Thank you!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

[MLAA]

8. Wow! Gorgeous!

You nailed it. I really love the nose area. I find that the hardes part of a portrait and you did it beautifully. She will love it.

[LiberalLoner]

10. Thank you! ❤️

[bif]

11. I'd say you nailed it!

Great job! I wish I could paint people as well as you do!