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Related: About this forumSummer at Yellowstone National Park
(riding a high horse)
Remember that you said
In the dark of dawn patrol
Deliver to the light.
In the dark of dawn patrol
Now I lay me down to sleep
Gravity's got my bones
And rides the seven-headed beast
Hit them in their sleep
In the dark of dawn patrol
Gravity's got my bones
Hit them in their sleep
Hit them in their sleep
Only left alone
Remember that you said
Start kicking ass
Either way they die.
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Summer at Yellowstone National Park (Original Post)
Hiraeth
Mar 2016
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angstlessk
(11,862 posts)1. I know poetry is very personal (sometimes)
but can you give hints as to whom or what you are referring? Who are 'they'?
Hiraeth
(4,805 posts)2. the metaphorical, symbolical enemy
angstlessk
(11,862 posts)3. Like climate change? That enemy to all living things?
I guess I am one that looks for the concrete..
Hiraeth
(4,805 posts)4. I must confess. I did not write that poem. Welcome to beatpoemgenerator:
http://www.carbonpictures.com/pepper/beatpoemgenerator/
That is why I went back and put in parentheses the phrase that generated the poem.
Thought it turned out pretty cool.
That is why I went back and put in parentheses the phrase that generated the poem.
Thought it turned out pretty cool.
angstlessk
(11,862 posts)5. Yes it did
You could rework it to become yours!
Hiraeth
(4,805 posts)6. Maybe, I will do that one day. Thanks!