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Poetry

pretzel4gore

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4. alternate ending....

Reply to Nitram (Reply #3)

Mon Oct 1, 2018, 11:55 AM

Oct 2018

tonight you'll go to AA!
lol
the other ending, the one that 1st came was 'tonight you'll go all the way'...but 'cry and you cry alone' etc and nihilism is only pertinent personally

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Sober is Boring [View all] pretzel4gore Oct 2018 OP

That's so good. joshcryer Oct 2018 #1

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It occurs to me that full title of this poem should be: Nitram Oct 2018 #3

alternate ending.... pretzel4gore Oct 2018 #4